Wednesday, January 17, 2007


If I should die

this very moment

I wouldn't fear

For I've never known completeness

like being here

Wrapped in the warmth of you

Loving

every breath of you

Still my heart this moment

or it might burst




Gorecki

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I see you changed your blog template!! I like it!

I love this purple flower!

I really like this poem. It's deep....its profound...its so beautiful and it makes me want to live in this particular moment that the poem expresses- not fearing death because of love! WOW!!

jendayi said...

I must say, I was inspired... =)thank you urban butterfly. (wink wink)

Blu Jewel said...

nice page change!

the expression of this poem is wonderful. you've captured some intense emotions rather beautifully.

in case you didn't know, i have another blog

http://thesaphyrelounge.blogspot.com

if you wanna check out some of the poems/stories i've posted.

Anonymous said...

I'm digging the new look ;) It makes me feel like I'm looking at a wall in an underground poetry spot.

T.a.c.D said...

I like the new digs...really feeling the mood and moment of this poem...

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